2 thoughts on “Shadorma 600”

1. Excellent and effective use of staccato rhythm. It creates a sense of urgency that almost mimics panic.

   • Thank you. I started off with the first line, which I got from misreading something else, and then it went on from there. I am not sure what I was thinking but I must went along with the mood I was in at the moment I was writing. I don’t usually think this way. I liked it.

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