Haiku 1232, 1233, 1234, 1235

Here are some haiku that were written back last summer. They’ve been sitting around waiting. I don’t know why it’s taken so long to get them here.

Haiku 1232

midnight at the store
the mannequins drink coffee
try the new lipsticks

1/7/23

Haiku 1233

charming neighborhood
street signs spell out the question
who invited you?

8/31/22

Haiku 1234

inside these stories
built more solidly than life
many took refuge

8/31/22

Haiku 1235

sparkling kitchen sink
a perfect suburban home
step outside and scream

7/30/22

11 thoughts on “Haiku 1232, 1233, 1234, 1235

  1. The last one makes me think of The Stepford Wives. Too much perfection can definitely be stifling. I rather like the idea of mannequins and museum models and such-like having their own lives after humans have departed from the spaces – I just don’t want to witness them doing it.

    • I witnessed a lot of housewife perfection angst in my younger days (real and on TV such as in commercials). Ugh. As for secret mannequin lives I would love to visit with some off-duty figures. I bet the conversation would be about the most interesting thing I have ever heard.

    • Thank you. I have loved mannequins since I was young and when my mom was shopping I used to think about what their real lives were like when people were not around.

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