449.
complicated secret
innocent laughter
the pattern in the darkness.
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450.
The sunlight old and tired
then the shadow new and hard
it’s not yet necessary
but believe me,
it’s easier
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451.
periwinkle figures
in the shadows
outline a sideways night
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How interesting that all three snippets are about the interaction and juxtaposition of light and dark, literal and metaphorical, and that you are sharing these poems just as we have made it past the winter solstice.
Sometimes it is really mysterious to me how the snippets, I just put the pieces together, and I think they mean just something simple or on the surface; and then with reflection, or with the insight of others, such as you provide, there is more to them. I just don’t know how that happens but I am glad it does, and that they can do this.
#449 – Is that a typo – innicent or did you mean innocent? #450 conjured images of men attempting to pick up women at a bar…
You’re right. Typo. Fixed!