Shadorma 316, Tanka 188

From the collection The Immediate and No Sooner, 2021.

Shadorma 316
8/24/20

These three girls
went somewhere or did
something but
now they’re done
just the talk left Like car horns
all honking at once

Tanka 188
8/24/20

The picnic table
fades under the walnut tree
grayer and softer
more quiet and more stoic
with each summer that passes

4 thoughts on “Shadorma 316, Tanka 188

  1. That is exactly my picnic table you describe – do you have a crystal ball and are spying on my life?? So many of your poems….

  2. I like the idea of the manmade picnic bench gradually fading into its naturally surroundings. The first poem made me laugh because I think that is what it must sound like to outsiders when my siblings and I are together because we all talk at once and rather loudly.

    • I think picnic tables have to endure a lot, and also, I would love to know just a fraction of the stories they have heard…And I do think I would enjoy seeing your family in action.

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