Tanka 181,182, 183

From the collection published in 2021, The Immediate and No Sooner.

Tanka 181
6/25/20

giant glassy eye
rolls in unfocused circles
a small orange speck
darts in and out of vision
floating past the bleary lens

Tanka 182
6/25/20

Sharp nose set to sting
takes steady aim. First easy
then don’t hold back. Bite.
The drill cuts its precise mark.
Fine sawdust floats to the floor.

Tanka 183
6/25/20

Whisk that word that means
beat eggs and cream pale yellow
a froth of bubbles
poured on mushrooms in pastry
shut the oven door. It’s whisk.

4 thoughts on “Tanka 181,182, 183

  1. All three are great but I especially enjoyed your personification of the drill. The way you made drew the comparison to some kind of stinging insect was very effective.

    • I got my own drill a couple of years ago (rather than trying to use the one my husband has which is heavy and awkward for my hands) and I love it.

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