Haiku 786, 787, 788

From the book published in 2021, The Immediate and No Sooner.

786.
False sun ceiling lights
Fluorescent blue pool ripples
Swimmers lurch through laps
1/2/20

787.
he’s in for five years
prison cook said to a friend
he likes my chili
1/2/20

788.
the following thread
the needle who knows nothing
the balky fabric
1/10/20

4 thoughts on “Haiku 786, 787, 788

  1. That first poem is so evocative. I could instantly visualize the scene and feel the water. I have also created a story in my head that the convict in the second poem keeps getting incarcerated because he so adores the chili made by the prison cook.

    • I did so much swimming in my earlier years that I feel the smell of chlorine is comforting and I love a good pool blue color! I got the idea for the cook one in that the front desk guy at the Y when I was going there, his regular job actually was prison cook. I was thinking about that when I came up with this imagined scene, and I thought the same thing, the guy loves the chili and stays in ; or else, the other way, it’s one of those non-related set of observations that actually tell a story, but what???

    • Yes, me too. I never have ever felt that hand sewing (as I envision this poem to describe) really liked the way I handled it and all the components fought me.

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