Tanka 214, Tanka 215, Tanka 216

From the poetry collection published in 2021 containing poems written in 2020, The Immediate and No Sooner.

Tanka 214
10/22/20

the diner waitress
indulges a customer
fresh pot of coffee
sits waiting for the old man
shuffling from the parking lot

Tanka 215
10/22/20

carousel spins but
wild melody loses steam
the horse slackens pace
its painted eyes unwilling.
The child cries to be let down.

Tanka 216
10/22/20

the rank snobbery
of the fake topiary
prompted a pruning
I undertook with pleasure
How I dislike a phony.

One thought on “Tanka 214, Tanka 215, Tanka 216

  1. The faux topiary poem made me laugh. There was something a bit creepy about the carousel poem, maybe something about the painted eyes, or probably just because carousels are a bit too circus-adjacent for me and spark a little of my phobia.

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