Haiku 876, Haiku 877, Tanka 217, Tanka 218

From the poetry collection published in 2021 containing poems written in 2020, The Immediate and No Sooner.

Haiku 876
10/29/20

pale blue gut feeling
deepening into purple
the more you told me

Haiku 877
10/29/20

ladle dip scoop bail
old tired just plain unwilling
balky rowboat sinks

Tanka 217
10/29/20

the oak tree spreads out
an acre of yellow stars
your rake gathers up
arrays and arranges for
a change of constellations

Tanka 218
10/29/20

The oak tree insists
The leaf argues letting go
The wind gust decides
on the side of change: the leaf
is sent flying to your rake.

5 thoughts on “Haiku 876, Haiku 877, Tanka 217, Tanka 218

    • I love falling leaves and ever since I was young I could just watch them come down. It always seemed they were otherworldly somehow, the act of detaching themselves, they weren’t leaves anymore.

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