Haiku 724
tattoo on her arm
no detective work required
she loves Ed all right
7/11/19
Tanka 134
You’ll correct that rip
You’ll use that needle and thread
pull the seam up tight
until the fabric wrinkles
Even then you can’t be sure.
7/11/19
Shadorma 220
metal sun
underfoot. Your rays
lightning bolts
in concrete
set and fractured long ago
by this earthbound sky
7/11/19
I absolutely love that description of the cracked concrete. Superb!
Thank you. You know how I like concrete (why? who knows) and observing it and how it lives and ages.