Haiku 723
the chartreuse chanteuse
sizes up her audience
with a pink-tipped glance
7/2/19
Shadorma 217
lawnmower
engine starts up and
the machine
commences
the half-acre haircut round
with me as barber.
7/2/19
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I love the use of sibilance in the first poem. It makes me think of that singer as being very serpentine and sinuous.
Thank you. I don’t know why but I associate the letter s with singing (not because it starts with it, I think, but because of the sound, it somehow goes with the idea of singing. No one said my mind makes sense!).