the grin on your face
the hours all of us have spent
guessing the reasons
Red sun. End of day.
Night’s request for a clean start:
please wipe up that spill
A pink-stained cloud the answer
in scraps with moon shining through.
hid in the closet
all day and slept most of it
and no one noticed
4 thoughts on “Haiku 705, Tanka 126, Haiku 706”
While I am sure that probably wasn’t the intent of your writing, that last poem actually presents what is a pretty enticing scenario.
I was thinking of the cat.Who has already figured out that this is a good idea! And yes, I agree with you, I do think the sleeping in the closet for the day idea, given that the closet is comfortable, well, it sounds like a little personal clubhouse just for yourself.
As I dragged myself out of bed this morning to collect the laundry to take to the basement I was wishing for a day with absolutely nothing I had to do. That closet does sound appealing.(k)
The more I am thinking about it I feel the same.
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