Whole Lot of Infrigidation
Oh we chat
waiting in line for our bagel breakfast
in the warm shop
with snug seats and clean tables and a fireplace
gas of course but still
it puts out a good strong stream of
winter-fighting heat
it flickers in a cozy way
so that we feel just great
waiting for our bagel breakfast
while the high snow clouds gather in the sky
and water mains break all over town
1/3/18
I love the way your imagery shuttles between warmth and cold. It perfectly captures this season where we experience the chill of low temperatures but also find comfort in cosy things.
I think that is the best part of this season, there are extremes, warm and cold, darkness and light, and so on. So we notice things more, it seems.
I could envision this scene in my head as I read it. What a lovely poem!
Thank you. I like winter!