Landscapes in another sense.
321.
the cash volcano
melts the frozen bank account
pays the past-due bills
9/13/17
322.
living room carpet
a field of pink rosettes crushed
a sleeping cat dreams
9/13/17
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All those Powerball dreams…(K)
Oh yes!
Volcanoes and crushed rosettes…you’ve been having some wild dreams!
Just your run-of-the-mill crazy thoughts bumping into one another in my head…
It’s a good thing you have a creative outlet.
Otherwise there is not telling if society could survive me! Or me survive it, more likely.
If more people had rampant imaginations the world would probably be a more peaceful place.
Yes. Because, #1, they could indulge themselves in thought and maybe not in deed, and #2, they could foresee consequences better, maybe.
They might be happier with their own thoughts, feel less need to ‘have’ things they can touch and own.
I love that the word “crushed” could apply to the colour and design of the carpet or to the cat’s dreams. But do cats allow their dreams to be crushed?
I think, after some consideration, a cat never feels crushed in the human sense, only thwarted.
I like both of these, Claudia!